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Monday, September 6, 2021

THE wreckage

 donk!! “there goes dingy number 17,” yells the captain. The captain’s  teeth were chattering like no tomorrow and there was going to be no tomorrow if he

 didn't tell the crew what to do.


 THE CAPTAIN MADE A good decision, well he though he did. He decided it was nice and sheltered but because it was 1936 the DEPTH SOUNDER was not a thing yet. The captain was mortified. why was he a mortified? YOU ASK, WELL, because it was the opposite to floating and he was land sinking The water was drying up and causing “Billyo” ( his boat )  to donk onto the land. Most of the dinghies fell overboard because one side was leaning over too much, The crew on night watch were the only survivors after the boat cracked in the middle like the Evergreen stuck in the Suez Canal. As he looks over feeling sick like he was about to throw up and then he saw a flash of blue then there was nothing just plan black. To be continued…          










4 comments:

  1. Amazing story Alice, you have added some great detail here to paint a picture in the readers mind. I can't wait to read the rest.

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  2. Awesome mahi Alice!
    You used some really cool writing elements that made your story very realistic.

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